It’s alarming when I’ve seen this same premise for a Creepypasta story, as I have a Literotica story.
… Wow, I should start reviewing Literotica stories. Erm- I mean, hello! You had better be feeling claustrophobic today, because we’re looking at Caved In!
Ahem!
““It cannot be seen, cannot be felt, Cannot be heard, cannot be smelt, It lies behind stars and under hills, And empty holes it fills, It comes first and follows after, Ends life, kills laughter.” – J.R.R. Tolkien”
Did… did we just open this story with a fucking Tolkien quote?
“We saw the already weak light vanish before us, tons of solid, cold rock collapsing behind us but we never gave up, well, until now.”
‘I mean, being trapped underground and starving to death was just sort of a bummer, but then we just couldn’t stand it!’
“Our water and food soon finished and fatigue came in. Most of our friend’s cold, vulnerable bodies were under that pile of rock.”
But it wasn’t a rock! It was a roooooooock lobster!
… Er, I mean, I’m sorry for your loss.
“We have already passed our first night, I couldn’t sleep, there were shadows in that dark cave, they moved, writhing, twitching…”
Yes, in the completely pitch black cave, there was somehow shadows. Like… double-ply darkness, yo.
“There was also that scratching, never-ending, high pitched…”
We should never have invited that DJ into our cave.
“The next day I started exploring the empty cave but with no results. We were stuck, but when I returned to the group I could see heavenly beams of light filtering through the walls, but what I saw, illuminated by the light, was unearthly.”
Jesus, are you stuck in a cave-in, or a poetry club?
“Dismembered bodies, severed limbs, and dry corpses, full of flies. Flies!”
Flies? Flies. FLIES?!
“If there were flies there could be an exit to the surface!”
Yes, yes, but were there flies?!
“I couldn’t look anymore at the massacre so I turned around, willing to search for an exit, full of hope, but behind me there were figures, dark, bloody smiles, emotionless faces, black, empty eyes… They sat there, unmoving, unblinking…”
What the actual fuck are you talking about? This is a scary story, not slam poetry.
“They were the things we tried to repel by sleeping, the real light…”
… Good for you?
“We can easily forgive a child who is afraid of the dark; the real tragedy of life is when men are afraid of the light.”-Plato”
And we end with a Plato quote. We have officially hit Pretension Nirvana.
So, that was Caved In! How was it?
… What the ass did I just read. I mean- what?! The imagery involved was disconcerting, I’ll give them that, but it’s just way too flowery. I mean- two literary quotes? Two?!
Over the years, I’ve sorta fallen away from traditional video game reviewing. I mean- who cares what they even say? They’re probably paid for anyway. So, yeah, I have no idea how the rest of the world is treating Batman: Arkham Knight.
But I do know that I have had sex that wasn’t as fucking good as this fucking game.
(And no, I’m not just talking about Nightwing’s spandex covered ass.)
ACK! Sorry for the lack of post yesterday! Grad night, and everything. Forgot it went on so long! So, in penance, here is… me! As… a magical girl, I guess? I tried to draw myself in my suit from yesterday AND THINGS KIND OF GOT AWAY FROM ME.
I always wonder what sort of protocol exists for trying to review one’s own Creepypasta. Like- am I allowed to? Or is it just douchey? Like laughing at one’s own jokes? And if I am allowed to review it, am I allowed to like it? Or do I have to hate it? What if I hate it anyway? What if I like it anyway?! Who am I?! WHERE AM I?! WHAT AM I WEARING?!?!
My titles are literally just lyrics to a song I happen to be listening to, with the word “Omegle” thrown in. This is my life. This is what I have come to.
Ahem!
Is hypnosis real? I hypnotized my friend to strip naked at the school assembly tomorrow and sing “I’m a Little Teapot”. No chance or greatest day ever tomorrow?
It better be real, or that documentary on hypnosis, The She-Creature, was a complete lie.
why my ex bf wants to have sex with me?
Because your future boyfriend doesn’t have a time machine yet?
cum frappe
This is the kind of quality content I deliver, people.
if i call you dicktater will you tater tot my dick
What is even happening tonight.
What do you think my brother would do if I “accidentally” sent him nudes? I’m a girl.
This is the Mondayest Saturday ever.
Master looking for bitchs to pay me to fuck them 1m for one hour
YOU FUCKING PEOPLE.
Why are a white girl and an asian boy getting together?
It’s nice to know that everybody is fucked up today. Not just a few people. Like, everybody is goddamn insane. Gives me hope for humanity, you know?
Dildo improvisation for a sixteenF? Horny af
Hmm, that’s good, but I was really look for something in a “Makes Me Want To Kill Myself”. Do you have any of that in stock?
5 seconds of summer
Aaaah, there we go, now I want to slit my wrists. Thanks very much.
A VERY STRANGE PLACE 